Do you think buying lotter tickets is a good way to get rich?
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I think that buying lottery tickets are bad. Buying lottery tickets is just luck. Also, it dosen\'t have my effort. So I think that buying lottery tickets are bad.
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I think that buying lottery tickets are bad. Buying lottery tickets is just luck.
>> I think that buying lottery tickets is not a good thing because winning depends on luck.
Also, it dosen\'t have my effort.
>> Also, it doesn\'t involve skills or even require any effort on my part.
So I think that buying lottery tickets are bad.
>> So I think that buying lottery tickets is bad.
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