Do you think caffeine is a dangerous drug? Are there any health benefits in terms drinking coffee?

2014-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Some people can’t live a day without caffeine. They drink coffee to wake themselves up in the morning or drink Redbull to relieve their physical fatigue during a day. This is because caffeine increases wakefulness and boost energy. For those, caffeine effect overrides the risk of that of side effect. Of course caffeine is a dangerous drug causing caffeine intoxication. Caffeine intake increases the risk of developing insomnia, anxiety, irritability, etc. However, it occurs only after ingestion of large amounts of it. The good news is, it is unlikely that people face longer odds to make a big health issue. Because toxic doses are 50 times higher than normally used doses. On the other hand, for pregnant and nursing women, it is recommended to cut down on caffeine intake since it can affect baby’s health. I am dying for coffee and chocolate, but as a nursing mom, i try to limit consumption. As a result, moderate amount of caffeine intake wouldn’t be a problem, even helpful in some case

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]!

Thanks for sharing your ideas in writing.

I totally agree with you.
I am so proud of you because you always think about your baby\'s health.

She is so fortunate to have you as her mom. Talk to you soon.

Have a great night! Take Care!

Teacher Nina

 

Some people can’t live a day without caffeine.

>> Correct!

They drink coffee to wake themselves up in the morning or drink Redbull to relieve their physical fatigue during a day.

>> They drink coffee to wake up themselves in the morning or drink \"Redbull\" to relieve their physical fatigue during the day.

This is because caffeine increases wakefulness and boost energy.

>> Did you mean; This is because caffeine makes you awake and boosts your energy.

>> OR: Caffeine makes you alert and energized.

For those, caffeine effect overrides the risk of that of side effect.

>> Did you mean: Because of those, caffeine increases the risk of experiencing side effects.
Of course caffeine is a dangerous drug causing caffeine intoxication.

>> Correct!

Caffeine intake increases the risk of developing insomnia, anxiety, irritability, etc.

>> Correct!

However, it occurs only after ingestion of large amounts of it.

>> However, it only occurs after ingesting a large amount of it.

>> OR: It only occurs when you intake a lot of coffee.

The good news is, it is unlikely that people face longer odds to make a big health issue.

>> Correct!

Because toxic doses are 50 times higher than normally used doses.

>> Correct!

>> OR: Because toxicity happens if the dose is fifty times higher than the usual.  

On the other hand, for pregnant and nursing women, it is recommended to cut down on caffeine intake since it can affect baby’s health.

>> Correct!

>> OR: On the other hand, for pregnant and nursing women, it is recommended to cut down on caffeine intake since it can affect the baby\'s health.

I am dying for coffee and chocolate, but as a nursing mom, i try to limit consumption.

>> I am dying for coffee and chocolate, but as a nursing mom, I try to limit it.

>> OR: I am dying for coffee and chocolate, but as a nursing mom, I try to limit my consumption.
As a result, moderate amount of caffeine intake wouldn’t be a problem, even helpful in some case

>> As a result, moderate amount of caffeine intake wouldn\'t be a problem, even helpful in some cases.

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