Do you think cell phones really interfere with equipment in hospitals and on airplanes?
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I heard and saw those reminders in the gas station and from my friends.
I usually talk to my relatives and best friends on the phone for a long time.
And with that behavior, my cousins reminded me about the bad effect of using your cellphone close to my head.
Thanks for the informative essay. Have a good week and month ahead of you.
Teacher Nina
Indeed, there have been a lot of controversies over whether cell phones really interfere with equipment in gas stations, cars, on airplanes as well.
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Even experts and scientists are divided in the debate.
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It is somewhat difficult to understand thoroughly for normal people who tend to believe what they see and experience.
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We can’t see how the electromagnetic field emitted from electronic devices such as cell phones, high voltage lines, or wireless gadgets interferes with other equipment and what the result will be.
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Some experts warn that talking over your cell phone with your phone placing close to your head too long can be detrimental to your health.
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There was an allegation that using a cell phone at the gas station can cause the blast.
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Until recently using the cell phone on the plane has been prohibited, although it is now allowed except during taking-off and landing.
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Taking all the researches into account, it seems quite obvious that electric devices interfere with other equipment.
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