Do you think change is good? Why or why not?

2021-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think it’s good to change by myself. because I can various experience. through this experience I can feel various emotion and so on. but it isn’t good to change by somesone. because suddenly change is I feel scary. so I want to change anythings it’s good.

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I think it’s good to change by myself. because I can various experience.

>> I think change is good for me to experience various things.

through this experience I can feel various emotion and so on.

>> Although through this experience, I might feel different emotions.

but it isn’t good to change by somesone.

>> Sometimes change is not good.

because suddenly change is I feel scary.

>> It can suddenly feel scary.

so I want to change anythings it’s good.

>> So I only want changes that are good.

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