Do you think change is important in people\'s life? Explain your answer.
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I think change is important. But most peaple don\'t like changes. I don\'t like changes also. However, change makes people have new life.
I want to have a change.
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I think change is important. But most peaple don\'t like changes.
>> I think change is important but most people don\'t like changes.
I don\'t like changes also.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I don\'t like changes, too.
However, change makes people have new life.
>> CORRECT
I want to have a change.
>> CORRECT
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