Do you think charitable institutions can make the lives of the orphans better?

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Recently, public confidence in the charitable sector has eroded due to a barrage of media reports on scandals and abuses. 

>> Did you mean: Recently, the public confidence in charitable sector has eroded due to the barrage of media reports on scandals and abuses.

>> OR: Recently, the trust of the confidence towards charitable sector has eroded due to the barrage of media reports on scandals and abuses.

There were incidents that the institutions involved in allegations of criminal and civil wrongdoings such as embezzling money donated from people, breaches of the duties of loyalty and prudence, failing to carry out the mission of the charity, negligent management of assets, bad treatment of orphans, pursuing profit through operating the orphanages, child exploitation, etc. 

>> There were incidents that the institutions were involved in allegations of criminal and civil wrongdoings such as embezzling money donated by people, breaches the duties of loyalty and prudence, failing to carry out the mission of the charity, negligence with the management of assets, bad treatment to orphans, pursuing profit through operating orphanages, child exploitation, etc. 

However, it is true that the charitable institutions have made the lives of the orphans better and made a great contribution to our society.

>> Correct!

In order for us to reduce such bad practices, we need to improve enforcement of the fiduciary responsibilities of charitable managers. 

>> Did you mean: In order for us to reduce such bad practices, we need to improve the enforcement of the fiduciary\'s responsibilities like managers.

>> OR: In order for us to reduce such bad practices, we need to improve the enforcement of the fiduciary\'s responsibilities.

In addition, we need to provide comprehensive and effective oversight of the charitable sector.

>> In addition, we need to provide a comprehensive and effective oversight of the charitable sector.