Do you think children nowadays eat too much fast food and don't play enough sports?
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Do you think children nowadays eat too much fast food and don\'t play enough sports?
Some point Yes. Children nowdays eat lots of fast food. Hamberger, Fish and chips, coke, fanta etc.
>> At some point, yes. Children nowadays eat lots of fast food, like hamburger, fish and chips, coke, Fanta, etc..
And I think that those fast food are not too bad for children. For example I love subway sandwich, which has lots of vegetable (I love onion most), bread ,hams and source.
>> And I think that those fast food are not too bad for children. For example, I love subway sandwich, which contains a lot vegetable, (I love onion the most), bread ,hams and sauce.
It is PERPECT for one meal. and not very expensive. Yes I LOVE FAST FOOD. haha. and let`s talk about sports.
>> It is perfect for one meal and it\'s not very expensive. Yes, I LOVE FAST FOOD. Haha.
and let`s talk about sports.The old days people has not much to do. so They used their body to make fun thing.
>>Let\'s talk about sports. In the old days, people didn\'t have much to do, so they used their body to make fun things.
but nowdays there are lots of thing to do. movie. video games, and watching SPORTS. People theseday don`t have to move own body. so YES children and adult don`t play enough sports.
>> People these days have a lot of activities to engage in without needing to move their body, like playing computer or video games, watching movies or television, surfing the internet, etc. So, Yes; children and adult don`t play enough sports nowadays.
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