Do you think children today grow up faster than in the past? Discuss.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the now children is better tall than before children because now children is many eating.
So now children is tall.
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Do you think children today grow up faster than in the past? Discuss.
I think the now children is better tall than before children because now children is many eating.
>>> I think children today are taller than children in the past because they eat more.
So now children is tall.
>>> Therefore, children today are taller.
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