Do you think Christmas makes people work harder or relax more?
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think Christmas makes people work harder or relax more?
I think Christmas makes people happier than the other days.
So, we can work harder, It’s not the reason just for our Christmas present, but It’s for that we spend time to relax with our love people.
Anyway, I’m happy when I imazine that day because I can make my son happy with the present what he wants.
I remember recent episode but with my son.
I belief that my son still believe Santa.
One day, recently, He suddenly said “I know that you and you are my Santa.”, pointing at me and my husband. And “I know the Santa was gym class teacher when I was younger than now”
So I asked him that why he cried a lot with Santa, if you already knew it.
He said “Surprise for him”.
We were happy that day , thanks for him.
강사 첨삭
I think Christmas makes people happier than the other days.
So, we can work harder, It’s not the reason just for our Christmas present, but It’s for that we spend time to relax with our love people.
>> So, we can work harder. It’s not just for our Christmas presents, but also to spend time relaxing with our loved ones.
>> I think Christmas makes people happier than other days.
So, we can work harder, It’s not the reason just for our Christmas present, but It’s for that we spend time to relax with our love people.
>> So, we can work harder. It’s not just for our Christmas presents, but also to spend time relaxing with our loved ones.
Anyway, I’m happy when I imazine that day because I can make my son happy with the present what he wants.
>> Anyway, I’m happy when I imagine that day because I can make my son happy with the present he wants.
>> Anyway, I’m happy when I imagine that day because I can make my son happy with the present he wants.
I remember recent episode but with my son.
>> I remember a recent episode with my son.
>> I remember a recent episode with my son.
I belief that my son still believe Santa.
>> I believe that my son still believes in Santa.
>> I believe that my son still believes in Santa.
One day, recently, He suddenly said “I know that you and you are my Santa.”, pointing at me and my husband.
>> One day recently, he suddenly said, “I know that you and you are my Santa,” while pointing at me and my husband.
And “I know the Santa was gym class teacher when I was younger than now”
>> And he said, “I know Santa was the gym class teacher when I was younger.”
>> And he said, “I know Santa was the gym class teacher when I was younger.”
So I asked him that why he cried a lot with Santa, if you already knew it.
>> So I asked him why he cried so much with Santa if he already knew.
>> So I asked him why he cried so much with Santa if he already knew.
He said “Surprise for him”.
>> He said, “It was a surprise for him.”
>> He said, “It was a surprise for him.”
We were happy that day , thanks for him.
>> We were happy that day, thanks to him.
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