Do you think colon cleansing is an effective way to avoid stomach problems and diseases?
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I didn\'t know \'colon cleansing\'. So I searched what is the \'colon cleansing\' . Colon cleansing is the way that remove coprostasis. If I have coprostasis, I need it, but I have good colon, I don\'t need it.
The way most of things is not good way about all people.
I don\'t know how to do \'colon cleansing\'. Even if this way is good for colon, but I don\'t want to do it.
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Hi, Ms. [Name]!
Me neither, I didn\'t have any knowledge about colonirrigation or colon cleansing until I saw a lot of video clips circualting online. THe first thing that came to my mind is the recommendtion of doctors, which I learned that it is not safe when it is not needed especially not prescribed by doctors.
Stay well.
Aki~
I didn\'t know \'colon cleansing\'. So I searched what is the \'colon cleansing\'.
>>> I didn\'t know \'colon cleansing\'. So I searched what \'colon cleansing.
Colon cleansing is the way that remove coprostasis.
>>> Colon cleansing is the way that removes coprostasis.
If I have coprostasis, I need it, but I have good colon, I don\'t need it.
>>> If I have coprostasis, I need it, but if I have a good colon, I don\'t need it.
The way most of things is not good way about all people.
>>> Most things are not a good way for all people.
I don\'t know how to do \'colon cleansing\'.
>>> CORRECT!
Even if this way is good for colon, but I don\'t want to do it.
>>> Even if this way is good for the colon, I don\'t want to do it.
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