Do you think colors affect your mood? How?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, colors affect our mood.
We can simply prove it.
For instance, if we see a man in black, then we can feel something dark and scary.
But, if the man wears colorful clothes, then we can think that he is such a nice fashionist.
Because of this reason, I think various colors affect out mood.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for the efforts today again! See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
We can simply prove it.
We can simply prove it.
>>CORRECT!
For instance, if we see a man in black, then we can feel something dark and scary.
For instance, if we see a man in black, then we can feel something dark and scary.
>>For instance, if we see a man in black, then we can feel something dark and scary about him.
But, if the man wears colorful clothes, then we can think that he is such a nice fashionist.
But, if the man wears colorful clothes, then we can think that he is such a nice fashionist.
>>But, if the man wears colorful clothes, then we\'d think that he is such a nice fashionista.
Because of this reason, I think various colors affect out mood.
Because of this reason, I think various colors affect out mood.
>>CORRECT!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.