Do you think companies should offer employees a lifetime employment?
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In the past, a life time employment was a sort of the norm and general practice in Japan for a long time. Japanese companies and employees has perceived the lifetime employment as a virtue of Japanese society. And the philosophy has played as a foundation of Japanese economy and development. Employees thanked and were inspired by the policy and paid back to their companies by working hard and being more productive. The model has worked well until recently before Japan was hit the economic recession. Now it changed completely. We can hardly see that private companies or even the government guarantees a life time employment. Who in the world does not want a job security? In the modern economic, one of the most critical issues for an employee is getting a stable job, however we all are put at the risk of losing a job regardless of our wish or will. Cons of the lifetime employment is the increase of youth unemployment, low productivity due to mannerism and weak competition.
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T.G.I.F. Sir [이름]!
Thanks for this spectacular essay.Well said. ^^ HIhihi! You were able to touch a lot of things about this topic.
Of course, all of us want to have a secured job.
However, you also mentioned about the cons of it.
But I think it really depends on the person on how he/ she will value her job.
Talk to you very soon.
Teacher Nina
In the past, a life time employment was a sort of the norm and general practice in Japan for a long time.
>> Correct
>> OR: In the past, a lifetime employment was a sort of a norm and general practice in Japan for a long period of time.
Japanese companies and employees has perceived the lifetime employment as a virtue of Japanese society.
>> Correct
And the philosophy has played as a foundation of Japanese economy and development.
>> Correct
Employees thanked and were inspired by the policy and paid back to their companies by working hard and being more productive.
>> Correct
The model has worked well until recently before Japan was hit the economic recession.
>> Did you mean: The model has worked well until recently before Japan was hit by the economic recession.
Now it changed completely.
>> Correct
We can hardly see that private companies or even the government guarantees a life time employment.
>> Correct
Who in the world does not want a job security?
>> Correct
In the modern economic, one of the most critical issues for an employee is getting a stable job, however we all are put at the risk of losing a job regardless of our wish or will.
>> Correct
Cons of the lifetime employment is the increase of youth unemployment, low productivity due to mannerism and weak competition.
>> Correct
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