Do you think computers are smarter than human beings? Answer in a few sentences?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think computers are smarter than human beings because they never make mistakes. Whenever I get the correct answers, I put the data into the computer for the result. It always gives me correct answers. If there are errors, that might result from wrong data. When I write essays or messages, the program picks up the errors in my writing and then notices me better or exact expressions. When I would like to find out special information, such as the nice restaurants, attractions, weather, even direction, etc., I just sit in front of computers and push the buttons to get it. Anytime the computers give me good information, but sometimes it is not my favorites, though. I trust the computers about that.
How can the computer handle all of those? Yes. We need to answer this to admit the above fact. The computer needs human beings to be smart. In conclusion, who is much smarter, computers or human beings?
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
This answer is very critical and practical at the same time. Human beings created the computer so we assume that we are more intelligent than it. However, our brain\'s evolution or development cannot seem to catch up with the way the computer decodes data and analyze them as well. Thus, we have become more dependent to this technology today more than ever.
Think of a time you have not used a computer or smartphone and notice how slow things can be. Thus, we have to handle this technology with care as it helps our lives to be better, on the other hand, harm us too when mishandled.
Thank you for this excellent answer. It was so well-written, I have suggested very few grammar input. Carry on!
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-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
It always gives me correct answers. If there are errors, that might result from wrong data.
When I would like to find out special information, such as the nice restaurants, attractions, weather, even direction, etc., I just sit in front of computers and push the buttons to get it.
Whenever I get the correct answers, I put the data into the computer for the result.
>> Correct!
It always gives me correct answers. If there are errors, that might result from wrong data.
>> Correct!
When I write essays or messages, the program picks up the errors in my writing and then notices me better or exact expressions.
>> Correct!
Or: When I write essays or messages, the program picks up the errors in my writing and then notices me better or notes the exact expressions.
When I would like to find out special information, such as the nice restaurants, attractions, weather, even direction, etc., I just sit in front of computers and push the buttons to get it.
>> Correct!
Anytime the computers give me good information, but sometimes it is not my favorites, though. I trust the computers about that.
>> Correct!
How can the computer handle all of those?
How can the computer handle all of those?
>> Correct!
Yes. We need to answer this to admit the above fact.
>> Correct!
The computer needs human beings to be smart. In conclusion, who is much smarter, computers or human beings?
>> Correct!
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