Do you think confidence in converstation is important?
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think confidence in converstation is important?
Exactly right. I think it is.
For me, as I said, I usually feel so difficult to tell strangers.
I think the reason is related with personality and confidence.
An area of personality is hard to change itself,
But, the other area of confidence can be grown up by ourselves.
I also found out that It was not easy. We have to try it so hard , person by person.
However, If we keep giving e-steems to our minds , as if we water the plants every days,
we should grow up high than before, I believe that.
강사 첨삭
Exactly right. I think it is.
For me, as I said, I usually feel so difficult to tell strangers.
>> For me, as I said, I usually find it very difficult to talk to strangers.
>> CORRECT
For me, as I said, I usually feel so difficult to tell strangers.
>> For me, as I said, I usually find it very difficult to talk to strangers.
I think the reason is related with personality and confidence.
>> I think the reason is related to personality and confidence.
>> I think the reason is related to personality and confidence.
OR >> I believe it has to do with personality and confidence.
An area of personality is hard to change itself,
>> Aspects of personality are hard to change.
OR >> Certain parts of our personality are difficult to change.
But, the other area of confidence can be grown up by ourselves.
>> But other aspects of confidence can be developed by ourselves.
OR >> On the other hand, we can work on building our confidence.
I also found out that It was not easy.
>> I also found that it was not easy.
>> I also found that it was not easy.
OR >> I also realized that it was not easy.
We have to try it so hard , person by person.
>> We have to try very hard, step by step, for each person.
OR >> We need to make a strong effort, one person at a time.
However, If we keep giving e-steems to our minds , as if we water the plants every days, we should grow up high than before, I believe that.
>> However, if we keep giving esteem to our minds, as if we were watering plants every day, I believe that we can grow stronger than before.
OR >> If we continue to nurture our minds, like watering a plant every day, I believe that we can grow stronger than before.
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