Do you think convenience stores should offer healthier food options?
학생이 쓴 원문
If convenienve store would sell healthier dish it might be fun.
I think it is impossible.
the place is small and have a limit.
There are many kind of product we couldn\'t count .
Is it possible? I wonder too
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! You have a good point. It might be difficult for a convenience store to sell healthier food options because they focus on quick, easy-to-store items that have a longer shelf life. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this. ^^ Have a great day! ^^
~T. Jewel
If convenienve store would sell healthier dish it might be fun.
>>If convenience stores sold healthier dishes, it might be fun.
I think it is impossible.
I think it is impossible.
>>CORRECT
the place is small and have a limit.
the place is small and have a limit.
>>The place is small and has limitations.
There are many kind of product we couldn\'t count .
There are many kind of product we couldn\'t count .
>There are many kinds of products we couldn\'t count.
Is it possible? I wonder too.
Is it possible? I wonder too.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>Is it possible? I wonder about it too.
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