Do you think corruption will always be a part of business and politics?
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Hello there Sir [이름]!
Thank you very much for your composition.
Corruption is the main problem in my country.
Even government officials who are innocent are accused of doing it.
I appreciate that you explained your ideas in a great way.
Anyway, have a great night and weekend ahead of you.
Teacher Nina
I definitely don’t think that corruption is a part of business and politics.
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Due to the prevalence and repeated failure of eradication of corruption in our society, we all reached the point to give up our hope for transparent and corruption free society.
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Whenever we have elections for president or lawmakers, we are being wooed by politicians with promises of corruption free government and harsh crack-down on corruption.
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When they seize the power, they purge the people of the previous government in the name of making the clean government.
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However, not long after they took office, many governments become being involved in the similar corruption scandals.
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This phenomenon happens and repeats all the time, which makes us feel frustrated and not to foster a hope.
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I sometimes think that the politicians educate the public in that way not to expect a clean society and to make us think that corruption is inevitable.
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Indeed, we became so pessimistic about having corruption free society.
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