Do you think criminals can change?
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Although I am a little bit skeptical about the effectiveness of rehabilitation programs for criminals, I would like to believe that people can change.
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Some books or priests say that no matter how bad you were, you could be a different person.
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I have not researched it in details whether there are clear and reliable statistics that show that what percentage of criminals turned to be good persons.
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However, we frequently notice that many criminals commit a crime repeatedly.
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Due to the high recidivism rate, we tend to believe that \"once a crook always a crook.\"
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We all have prejudice against them and it is hard to change our perception.
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Many criminals claim that the social prejudice and people’s stereotype perception make them hard to become a new person.
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No one hires them and people try to avoid them when they are turned out to be ex-convicts.
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It could be true to some extent that we are the ones who force them to commit a second or third crime.
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We suely need to embrace them.
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