Do you think criminals can change? Why or why not?
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I think that It is different from criminal to criminal. I guess the criminal who accidentally commit a crime can change. But the criminal who aimed a crime like a serial murder will not change. There is a famous Korea proverb,'What is learned in the cradle is carried to the tomb'(or Old habits die hard). Whatever the reason, Criminal will never be forgiven and the crime should not happen.
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I think that It is different from criminal to criminal.
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I think that it is different from criminal to criminal.
I guess the criminal who accidentally commit a crime can change.
>> I guess the criminal who accidentally committed a crime can change.
But the criminal who aimed a crime like a serial murder will not change.
>> But the criminal who intentionally committed a crime like a serial murder will not change.
There is a famous Korea proverb,\'What is learned in the cradle is carried to the tomb\'(or Old habits die hard).
>> There is a famous Korean proverb that says,\' What is learned in the cradle is carried to the tomb. \'(or Old habits die hard).
Whatever the reason, Criminal will never be forgiven and the crime should not happen.
>> Whatever the reason is, the criminal will never be forgiven and the crime should not happen.
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