Do you think crying is a sign of weakness or strength?
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Babies cry when they are starving and people cry when they watch a sad movie, someone pass away and so on.
>> Babies cry when they are starving and people cry when they watch a sad movie, or someone passes away and so on.
There is saying in Korea \" men should cry only 3 times in life\".
>> CORRECT
These are when people are born, parents died and their country is destroyed.
>> These are when people are born, when parents die, and when their country is destroyed.
It means that men should not cry even if they are facing difficulties from varies situation.
>> It means that men should not cry even if they are facing difficulties from varied situation.
For the reason I stated above, I don\'t think crying is a sign of weakness or strength.
>> CORRECT
However, I have seen many adults who are crying when they are getting old.
>> CORRECT
I think there is change of hormone in human body therefore, they tend to cry even if it is nothing to cry.
>> I think there is a change in their hormones, therefore, they tend to cry even if there is nothing to cry about.
The other hands, patients who are suffering against serious disease look stronger than normal people because they realize that keeping healthy mind help curing their disease.
>> On the other hand, patients who are suffering from serious diseases look stronger than normal people because they realize that keeping a healthy mind helps in curing their disease.
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