Do you think dieting is necessary to be healthy, or can you be healthy without it?

I think dieting is necessary for health. Not only for losing weight, just for sustain being healthy, we need to eat balanced diet. But, it\'s hard to eat well-balanced meal everyday. Sometimes, we want to order the delivery food, and almost of them is unhealthy. I think it is sufficient that after the bad-balanced meal, we try to eat well-balanced meal. But, if you always ate only what you want, perhaps it make you unhealthy or get disease.

Hi Mary! That was a really thoughtful answer. I like how you pointed out that dieting isn’t just about losing weight but also about maintaining good health, that’s a balanced way of thinking. You also showed realistic insight by saying it’s hard to eat well every day and that we should make up for unhealthy meals later. Just remember a few small grammar points: say “a balanced diet,” not “balanced diet,” and “most of it is unhealthy,” instead of “almost of them.” Also, “it might make you unhealthy or cause diseases” sounds smoother than “get disease.” Overall, your response was logical, relatable, and clearly expressed. Great job explaining your ideas in a natural and thoughtful way!

-Teacher Wela 

Not only for losing weight, just for sustain being healthy, we need to eat balanced diet.

>> It’s not only for losing weight, but also for maintaining good health. We need to eat a balanced diet.

But, it\'s hard to eat well-balanced meal everyday.

>> However, it’s hard to eat a well-balanced meal every day.

Sometimes, we want to order the delivery food, and almost of them is unhealthy.

>> Sometimes, we want to order delivery food, and most of it is unhealthy.

I think it is sufficient that after the bad-balanced meal, we try to eat well-balanced meal.

>> I think it’s enough if we try to eat healthy meals after having unhealthy ones.

But, if you always ate only what you want, perhaps it make you unhealthy or get disease.

>> However, if you always eat only what you want, it might make you unhealthy or cause diseases.