Do you think dogs should be banned from parks? Why?
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No, I don\'t
But I think pet owners should make sure that the pet has neck string.
And they also should clean their pet\'s excrement.
On the condition of this two thing, I think dogs could be allowed from parks
And the scene of human playing with pets can looks good.
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No, I don\'t
>> No, I don\'t.
But I think pet owners should make sure that the pet has neck string.
>> But I think pet owners should make sure that the pet is on a leash.
And they also should clean their pet\'s excrement.
>> CORRECT!
On the condition of this two thing, I think dogs could be allowed from parks
>> On the condition of these two things, I think dogs could be allowed from parks.
And the scene of human playing with pets can looks good.
>> And the scene of humans playing with pets can look good.
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