Do you think dreams have any meaning?
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Hello Eva,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on dreams. I love your comparison of dreams to a map, it’s such a creative and meaningful way to explain how important dreams are in guiding us through life. Without dreams, it’s easy to feel lost or without purpose, just like being without a map.
It’s also inspiring that you remind yourself of your dreams when you feel tired or unmotivated. That shows a lot of strength and determination. Keep holding on to your dreams and moving forward, they give life direction and make every step worthwhile.
Happy holidays, and see you on Thursday!
~Teacher Cathy
I think that having dreams is very important.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I believe that having dreams is very important.
If I don\'t have dreams, I don\'t have worth of life.
>>If I don\'t have dreams, I don\'t have a sense of worth in life.
If I have dreams, I have to do everything.
>>CORRECT
OR>>If I have dreams, I have to do everything I can to achieve them.
If I don\'t have dreams,it is don\'t have goal.
>>If I don\'t have dreams, I don\'t have any goals.
I think that dreams is my goal.
>>I think that dreams are my goals.
When I have to go top, I need map.
>>When I have to go to the top, I need a map.
If I don\'t have map, I don\'t know direction to go top.
>>If I don\'t have a map, I don\'t know the direction to go to the top.
Dreams seems like map.
>>Dreams seem like a map.
Sometimes I lose my dreams.
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OR>>Sometimes, I lose sight of my dreams.
At this time I feel running out of gas.
>>At this time, I feel like I\'m running out of gas.
I always find and remind my dreams.
>>I always find and remind myself of my dreams.
If you don\'t have dreams, you are dead.
>>CORRECT
OR>>If you don\'t have dreams, it\'s like you\'re not truly alive.
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