Do you think dreams have meanings?
학생이 쓴 원문
My dream is be a expert in my job.
Currently, my major is environmental engineering. So I think I have a job about that, and I want to be a expertise engineer.
The expert that I think is can act anywhere in the world.
So I need to study about other countries, and I will conversation with global people.
The foundation is that I can use and understand common language, English.
I have study English for a long time like other Korean students.
Therefore I can read it.
But I can\'t express well through English.
Also, about my major, Denmark, Finland, German and Netherlands is environmental advanced nation, So they have advanced systems.
I want to study in their school, And feel directly in their life.
For my wish, I\'m scheduled to applying the outbound program in next month.
For the applying, I achieved the high score in Toeic exam studying very hard for 3 months.
However, It includes a English interview too.
I try to practice myself first, It was not easy. That is why I start this class.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름], thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin.
My dream is be a expert in my job.
>>My dream is to be an expert in my job.
Currently, my major is environmental engineering. So I think I have a job about that, and I want to be a expertise engineer.
>>I am taking Environmental Engineering and I plan to have a career related to my course. I want to be an expert engineer.
The expert that I think is can act anywhere in the world.
>>I want to be good so I can work anywhere in the world.
So I need to study about other countries, and I will conversation with global people.
>>I need to study other cultures and I want to talk to a lot of people from different countries.
The foundation is that I can use and understand common language, English.
>>I want to learn how to communicate in English.
I have study English for a long time like other Korean students.
>>I have been studying English for a very long time just like other Korean students.
Therefore I can read it.
>>Therefore, I can already read well.
But I can\'t express well through English.
>>But I can\'t express my thoughts freely in English.
Also, about my major, Denmark, Finland, German and Netherlands is environmental advanced nation, So they have advanced systems.
>>Also, according to what I\'ve studied, Denmark, Finland, German, and Netherlands are an advanced nation that has an advanced systems.
I want to study in their school, And feel directly in their life.
>>I want to study in their schools and experience what they can offer.
For my wish, I\'m scheduled to applying the outbound program in next month.
>>As for me, I am applying the outbound program next month.
For the applying, I achieved the high score in Toeic exam studying very hard for 3 months.
>>I studied very hard for three months and as a result I got a high score in the TOEIC exam.
However, It includes a English interview too.
>>However, there will also be an English interview.
I try to practice myself first, It was not easy. That is why I start this class.
>>I practice a lot but it was not easy, that\'s why I took this class.
Jasmin.
My dream is be a expert in my job.
>>My dream is to be an expert in my job.
Currently, my major is environmental engineering. So I think I have a job about that, and I want to be a expertise engineer.
>>I am taking Environmental Engineering and I plan to have a career related to my course. I want to be an expert engineer.
The expert that I think is can act anywhere in the world.
>>I want to be good so I can work anywhere in the world.
So I need to study about other countries, and I will conversation with global people.
>>I need to study other cultures and I want to talk to a lot of people from different countries.
The foundation is that I can use and understand common language, English.
>>I want to learn how to communicate in English.
I have study English for a long time like other Korean students.
>>I have been studying English for a very long time just like other Korean students.
Therefore I can read it.
>>Therefore, I can already read well.
But I can\'t express well through English.
>>But I can\'t express my thoughts freely in English.
Also, about my major, Denmark, Finland, German and Netherlands is environmental advanced nation, So they have advanced systems.
>>Also, according to what I\'ve studied, Denmark, Finland, German, and Netherlands are an advanced nation that has an advanced systems.
I want to study in their school, And feel directly in their life.
>>I want to study in their schools and experience what they can offer.
For my wish, I\'m scheduled to applying the outbound program in next month.
>>As for me, I am applying the outbound program next month.
For the applying, I achieved the high score in Toeic exam studying very hard for 3 months.
>>I studied very hard for three months and as a result I got a high score in the TOEIC exam.
However, It includes a English interview too.
>>However, there will also be an English interview.
I try to practice myself first, It was not easy. That is why I start this class.
>>I practice a lot but it was not easy, that\'s why I took this class.
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