Do you think driving is dangerous? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think driving is dangerous.
On the road, actually everything is in danger.
There is a lot of speeding things like car, bus, motorcycle..
We might have an unexpect accident even through we drove safely.
And I can easier watched the accident on the TV news.
People must be careful when they are driving.
Now, I cannot drive and I want to learn but on the one hand I worry about unexpect accident.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
You can go and learn driving again. We actually have the same fear on the road due to what we watch on the news. However, you still need to feel confident when you are on the wheels. As teachers in driving say, relax and do some practice so that fear will be gone. Let\'s do this! ^^
You can go and learn driving again. We actually have the same fear on the road due to what we watch on the news. However, you still need to feel confident when you are on the wheels. As teachers in driving say, relax and do some practice so that fear will be gone. Let\'s do this! ^^
~T. Maine
>> Correct. :)
>>OR: Definitely, it is dangerous.
On the road, actually everything is in danger.
On the road, actually everything is in danger.
>> Actually on the road, everything is in danger.
There is a lot of speeding things like car, bus, motorcycle..
There is a lot of speeding things like car, bus, motorcycle..
>> There are a lot of speeding vehicles such as cars, buses, motorcycles, and trucks.
We might have an unexpect accident even through we drove safely.
We might have an unexpect accident even through we drove safely.
>> We might have an unexpected accident even thought we drove safely.
And I can easier watched the accident on the TV news.
And I can easier watched the accident on the TV news.
>> And I can easily watch the accidents on the news on TV.
People must be careful when they are driving.
People must be careful when they are driving.
>>Correct. :)
Now, I cannot drive and I want to learn but on the one hand I worry about unexpect accident.
Now, I cannot drive and I want to learn but on the one hand I worry about unexpect accident.
>> Now, I cannot drive and I want to learn it. On the other hand, I worry about unexpected situations.
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