Do you think eating out is becoming more popular than home-cooked meals? Why or why not?
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I think eating out is becoming more popular than home-cooked meals.
There are a few reasons about it.
First, most people usually don\'t have enough time to cook themselves on busy weekdays.
We also want to have relaxing and productive weekends by doing nothing or outdoor activities with our loved ones.
We can spend time in a valuable way by eating out.
Furthermore, eating out can be an economical choice better than home-cooked meals.
The price of each food ingredients is incleasing because of inflation nowadays.
Therefore, if we buy food ingredients individually, it can be more expensive than buy them in bulk at restaurants.
In result, eating out can be more ecomical choice than home-cooked meals under the assumption that we cook food which needs a lot of food ingredients.
For these reasons, eating out gets popular compared to home-cooked meals nowadays.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Great job explaining why eating out is becoming more popular! I like how you included both time and cost as reasons. It shows thoughtful reasoning. Your ideas are clear and well-organized. Keep practicing to make your writing even smoother, and you’re doing really well!
~Teacher Polly
There are a few reasons about it.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think eating out is becoming more popular than home-cooked meals for a few reasons.
First, most people usually don\'t have enough time to cook themselves on busy weekdays.
>>First, most people usually don’t have enough time to cook for themselves on busy weekdays.
We also want to have relaxing and productive weekends by doing nothing or outdoor activities with our loved ones.
>>CORRECT
OR>>We also want to have relaxing and productive weekends by doing nothing or enjoying outdoor activities with our loved ones.
We can spend time in a valuable way by eating out.
>>CORRECT
Furthermore, eating out can be an economical choice better than home-cooked meals.
>>Furthermore, eating out can be a more economical choice than cooking at home.
The price of each food ingredients is incleasing because of inflation nowadays.
>>The price of food ingredients is increasing due to inflation nowadays.
Therefore, if we buy food ingredients individually, it can be more expensive than buy them in bulk at restaurants.
>>Therefore, if we buy ingredients individually, it can be more expensive than buying meals in bulk at restaurants.
In result, eating out can be more ecomical choice than home-cooked meals under the assumption that we cook food which needs a lot of food ingredients.
>>As a result, eating out can be a more economical choice than home-cooked meals, especially for dishes that require many ingredients.
For these reasons, eating out gets popular compared to home-cooked meals nowadays.
>>CORRECT
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