Do you think eating too much chocolate is a vice? Why or why not?
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It\'s not vicious.maybe It depends on.
I think we need to eat chocolate when we are tired or depressed .
But , I don\'t think it\'s advisircble to eat too much.
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Hello, Grace!
Thanks for writing your homework. ^^
-T.Jhozel
It\'s not vicious.maybe It depends on.
>>It is not vicious. Maybe it depends.
I think we need to eat chocolate when we are tired or depressed .
>> Correct!
OR: When we\'re tired or depressed, I believe we should eat chocolate.
But , I don\'t think it\'s advisircble to eat too much.
>> However, I do not think it is advisable to eat excessively.
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