Do you think energy drinks are dangerous? How about if you drink them every day?

2015-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I have never drunk energy drinks even when I crammed for the mid-terms or the finals in college. I am scared of drinking them because I don’t have much knowledge about the side-effect of it. To be more exact, I have a feeling of vague resistance to them. However, many people opt to drink them whether they are working late, hitting the gym hard or wrangling the kids on a busy weekend. Loaded with legal stimulants like large doses of caffeine and natural supplements like guarana, ginseng and gingko biloba, these drinks are designed to increase energy, sharpen concentration and improve athletic performance. However, their stimulating properties can boost the heart rate and blood pressure, dehydrate the body, and prevent sleep. Individual responses to caffeine vary, so these drinks should be treated carefully because of how powerful they are.When used occasionally, energy drinks are not necessarily bad for you, but they shouldn't be seen as natural alternatives, either.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Sir [이름]!

Yahoo! The long weekend starts today!

I am so excited to sleep all weekend. hihihihihi.

How about you? I hope you are going to have something special.

I used to drink energy drinks when I was still having my OJT in the hospital.

It is difficult to have shifting schedule.

Your ideas are commendable. Thank you so much for this wonderful week again.
I hope that we will have more topics/ classes.

Have a nice weekend.

Teacher Nina


I have never drunk energy drinks even when I crammed for the mid-terms or the finals in college.

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>> OR: I didn\'t drink energy drinks even when I crammed for the mid-terms or finals in college.

I am scared of drinking them because I don’t have much knowledge about the side-effect of it.

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To be more exact, I have a feeling of vague resistance to them.

>> correct

However, many people opt to drink them whether they are working late, hitting the gym hard or wrangling the kids on a busy weekend.

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Loaded with legal stimulants like large doses of caffeine and natural supplements like guarana, ginseng and gingko biloba, these drinks are designed to increase energy, sharpen concentration and improve athletic performance.

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>> OR: Loaded with legal stimulants like large doses of caffeine and natural supplements like guarana, ginseng and gingko biloba are designed to increase energy, sharpen concentration and improve athletic performance.

However, their stimulating properties can boost the heart rate and blood pressure, dehydrate the body, and prevent sleep.

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Individual responses to caffeine vary, so these drinks should be treated carefully because of how powerful they are.

>> correct

When used occasionally, energy drinks are not necessarily bad for you, but they shouldn\'t be seen as natural alternatives, either.

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