Do you think Esports is a sport? Explain your answer.
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Yes, E-sports requires concentration and finger strength, sometimes need to teamwork.
So well qualified to be a sport
So I think E-sports is sports
So name is sports :D
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Do you think Esports is a sport? Explain your answer.
Yes, E-sports requires concentration and finger strength, sometimes need to teamwork.
>>> Yes because E-sports require concentration and finger-strength. It also sometimes needs teamwork.
So well qualified to be a sport
>>> So it\'s well-qualified to be a sport.
So I think E-sports is sports. So name is sports :D
>>> It even has the word \"sports\" in its name. That\'s why I think E-sports is a sport.
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