Do you think everyone deserves happiness? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Everyone deserves to be happiness. No one is born unhappy. People can pursue their own happiness. And I think we live to be happy.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
Everyone deserves to be happiness. No one is born unhappy. People can pursue their own happiness. And I think we live to be happy.
>> Everyone deserves to be happy. No one is born unhappy. People can pursue their own happiness. I think we live to be happy.
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