Do you think extreme diets are ever worth trying? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think,extreme diets are worth trying.
Some say the best plastic surgery is diets.
It desen\'t have to be an extreme diets.
if we lose weight at 2-3 kg,we are looked different.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! Sometimes small changes in diet can have a bigger impact than expensive treatments. It’s amazing how losing just a little weight can make people look and feel better. ^^ Have a great day! See you tomorrow!
~T. Jewel
I think,extreme diets are worth trying.
>>I think extreme diets are worth trying.
Some say the best plastic surgery is diets.
Some say the best plastic surgery is diets.
>>Some say the best plastic surgery is a good diet.
It desen\'t have to be an extreme diets.
It desen\'t have to be an extreme diets.
>>It doesn’t have to be an extreme diet.
if we lose weight at 2-3 kg,we are looked different.
if we lose weight at 2-3 kg,we are looked different.
>>If we lose 2–3 kg, we will look different.
OR
>>Losing 2–3 kg can make a difference in how we look.
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