Do you think family gatherings are necessary? What do you enjoy about family gatherings?
학생이 쓴 원문
In order to getting close with family, I think family gatherings are necessary.
One of the best ways is go to the family trip.
When you go on a family trip, you get closer to your family because you have more time to talk to each other.
First of all, our family eats a lot If we go on a trip.
We enjoy a hearty table with chicken, ramen and grilled meat.
Or If there has a swimming pool at accomodation, We enjoy there.
And then, there is a card game in Korea, called \"gostop\",
We enjoy with card game with my family.
강사 첨삭
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In order to getting close with family, I think family gatherings are necessary.
>>> In order to get close with family, I think family gatherings are necessary.
One of the best ways is go to the family trip.
>>> One of the best ways is to go on a family trip.
When you go on a family trip, you get closer to your family because you have more time to talk to each other.
>>> correct
First of all, our family eats a lot if we go on a trip.
When you go on a family trip, you get closer to your family because you have more time to talk to each other.
>>> correct
First of all, our family eats a lot if we go on a trip.
>>> correct
We enjoy a hearty table with chicken, ramen and grilled meat.
>>> correct
Or if there has a swimming pool at accomodation, We enjoy there.
>>> Or if there is a swimming pool at the accommodation, we enjoy it there.
And then, there is a card game in Korea, called \"gostop\",
>>> Also, there is a card game in Korea called \"go stop\".
We enjoy with card game with my family.
>>> We enjoy the card game with my family.
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