Do you think family reunions are important?
학생이 쓴 원문
These days, a single household is increasing, so a personal life is more important than family reunions.
But, I think that family is more important than a single life.
Family has a strong power that it is difficult to explain. So I prefer to often meet family.
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These days, a single household is increasing, so a personal life is more important than family reunions.
>> Correct
But, I think that family is more important than a single life.
>> Correct
Family has a strong power that it is difficult to explain. So I prefer to often meet family.
>> Family has a strong bond that it is difficult to beat. So I prefer to meet my family often.
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