Do you think famous people are happier than ordinary people?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think so not at all.
Famous people have a lot to lose.
And it will be hard if the popularity drops.
Of course they can make a lot of money,
Money doesn\'t guarantee happiness in life.
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I don\'t think so not at all.
>>I don\'t think so. Not at all.
Famous people have a lot to lose.
>>CORRECT
And it will be hard if the popularity drops.
>>CORRECT
Of course they can make a lot of money.
>>CORRECT
Money doesn\'t guarantee happiness in life.
>>CORRECT
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