Do you think famous people have the right to have a private life?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course I think that the famous people have the right to have a private life.
People may think that celebrities or other famous people are special, but I think they are the humans like us too.
And we all have a right to have a private life.
Because of this reason, I think famous people have the right to have a private life just like us.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
People may think that celebrities or other famous people are special, but I think they are the humans like us too.
>>People may think that celebrities or other famous people are special, but I think they are just humans like us too.
And we all have a right to have a private life.
And we all have a right to have a private life.
>>CORRECT!
Because of this reason, I think famous people have the right to have a private life just like us.
Because of this reason, I think famous people have the right to have a private life just like us.
>>CORRECT!
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