Do you think fashion is important for people\'s lives?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I thought it was very important before. But I don\'t care about it now. It\'s because I always wear comfortable clothes like sportswear or hoodies. And these things are good to work due to comfortable to move around.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic!
Fashion is sometime a way on how we express ourselves. It\'s sometimes signifies our identity. :)
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
Yes, I thought it was very important before.
>>Yes, I thought it was very important before but now I don\'t anymore.
But I don\'t care about it now.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
It\'s because I always wear comfortable clothes like sportswear or hoodies.
>> CORRECT
And these things are good to work due to comfortable to move around.
>> And these things are good to work with due to it being comfortable when moving around.
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