Do you think fast food, soda and sweets should be sold in school cafeterias?
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I think fast food, soda and sweets should not be sold in school cafeterias. But I am sure that some students would like to eat these foods. So if school cafeterias will make a day for selling fast food soda and sweets, the students will not be unhealthy and they would love it!
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I think fast food, soda and sweets should not be sold in school cafeterias.
>> CORRECT!
But I am sure that some students would like to eat these foods.
>> CORRECT!
So if school cafeterias will make a day for selling fast food soda and sweets, the students will not be unhealthy and they would love it!
>> So, if school cafeterias will only make a day for selling fast food, soda and sweets. It will not risk the students health and they will love it!
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