Do you think forgiving someone is better than punishing them? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
when I was young,I think to need punishiment.
I changed my opinion these days.I prefer forgive .
it\'s because ,crimes made not to loved many people
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! I think choosing to forgive shows wisdom and kindness. Holding grudges only makes things harder. Thank you for doing your homework. See you tomorrow! ^^
~T. Jewel
when I was young,I think to need punishiment.
>>When I was young, I thought punishment was needed.
I changed my opinion these days.
I changed my opinion these days.
>>I’ve changed my opinion these days.
I prefer to forgive.
>>CORRECT
it\'s because ,crimes made not to loved many people.
it\'s because ,crimes made not to loved many people.
>>It’s because committing crimes makes many people not love you
OR
>>Committing crimes makes people not love you.
>>Committing crimes makes people not love you.
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