Do you think gambling is good or bad for gamblers?
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I think it\'s not bad to gamble for fun. But I believe it\'s bad if it\'s too much whatever it it. Like it could interfere with your life. Also there\'s a traditional gamble in South Korea. I used to do it for a national holiday with my relatives.
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Wonderful Wednesday, Elic! It\'s good to see you again. I hope you\'re having a fantastic day. Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.
I think it\'s not bad to gamble for fun. But I believe it\'s bad if it\'s too much whatever it it. Like it could interfere with your life.
>> I think it\'s not bad to gamble if it\'s for fun but I believe too much of everything is not good. For instance, it can ruin your life.
Also there\'s a traditional gamble in South Korea. I used to do it for a national holiday with my relatives.
>> There\'s is a traditional gamble in South Korea and I used to play it with my relatives during national holiday.
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