Do you think gardening is good for your health?
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For a long time, many people have enjoyed gardening as their habit and their exercise.
>> Correct.
This is because gardening is helpful to their health and it makes the environment surrounding their house beautiful.
>>This is because gardening is helpful to their health and it makes the surrounding of their house beautiful.
Particularly, I want to talk about the good aspect of gardening for our health.
>> But I want to talk about the good aspect of gardening for our health.
Although gardening seems very inactive activity, it actually makes people keep moving and needs much energy.
>> Although gardening seems a very inactive activity, it actually makes people keep moving.
Thus, gardening can plays role as exercise without intention.
>> Thus, gardening becomes a good form of exercise.
Also, while gardening, people see beautiful flowers and trees, which makes people feel refresh and comportable.
>> Also, while gardening, people see beautiful flowers and trees, which makes them feel refreshed and relaxed.
Therefore, gardening can also have a positive effect on mental health.
>> Correct.
Hence, I believe that gardening is good for people\'s health.
>> Correct.
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