Do you think gardening is good for your health?

2015-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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For a long time, many people have enjoyed gardening as their habit and their exercise. This is because gardening is helpful to their health and it makes the environment surrounding their house beautiful. Particularly, I want to talk about the good aspect of gardening for our health. Although gardening seems very inactive activity, it actually makes people keep moving and needs much energy. Thus, gardening can plays role as exercise without intention. Also, while gardening, people see beautiful flowers and trees, which makes people feel refresh and comportable. Therefore, gardening can also have a positive effect on mental health. Hence, I believe that gardening is good for people's health.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

And another homework here. Thank you!

See you!

~Kelly^^

For a long time, many people have enjoyed gardening as their habit and their exercise.

>> Correct.

This is because gardening is helpful to their health and it makes the environment surrounding their house beautiful.

>>This is because gardening is helpful to their health and it makes the surrounding of their house beautiful.
Particularly, I want to talk about the good aspect of gardening for our health.

>> But I want to talk about the good aspect of gardening for our health.

Although gardening seems very inactive activity, it actually makes people keep moving and needs much energy.

>> Although gardening seems a very inactive activity, it actually makes people keep moving.

Thus, gardening can plays role as exercise without intention.

>> Thus, gardening becomes a good form of exercise.

Also, while gardening, people see beautiful flowers and trees, which makes people feel refresh and comportable.

>> Also, while gardening, people see beautiful flowers and trees, which makes them feel refreshed and relaxed.

Therefore, gardening can also have a positive effect on mental health.

>> Correct.
Hence, I believe that gardening is good for people\'s health.

>> Correct.

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