Do you think gardening is good for your health?

2015-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Answer in FIVE [5] SENTENCES ONLY It can affect you in good way, especially for your relaxation of mind. But it doesn't help your body health improve. As you work on it, you need to dig into soil, carry around heavy things. Even after working hard at workplace. After all these chores, you will be totally exhausted. Since I've watched my parents who have been into gardening, they looked so much exhausted after gardening so hard. So I can tell you gardenign is not that much related to your health.

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Hello [이름].
Thank you for sending this in and for sharing your opinion.
~Kelly^^
Answer in FIVE [5] SENTENCES ONLY
It can affect you in good way, especially for your relaxation of mind.
>>
It can affect you in a good way, especially your mind relaxation.
But it doesn\'t help your body health improve.
>> Correct.
>> or: It doesn\'t help improve your health.
As you work on it, you need to dig into soil, carry around heavy things.
>> Correct.
Even after working hard at workplace. After all these chores, you will be totally exhausted.
>> After doing all these chores,
you will be totally exhausted.
Since I\'ve watched my parents who have been into gardening, they looked so much exhausted after gardening so hard.
>> Since I\'ve watched my parents who have been into gardening, they looked so exhausted after gardening so hard.
So I can tell you gardenign is not that much related to your health.
>> So I can tell you that gardening is not good for your health.

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