Do you think getting old is a good thing or a bad thing?

2022-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think it would absolutely be a bad thing. When I was at teenager, I wanna be an adult fast. But I became a 20s, the time so flies. And I feel scared that I will be a 30s. Also, I\'m afraid I\'ll die without getting married. If she dumps me the next time, I\'ll curse her. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

I think most people feel the same way. Time flies indeed.

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I think it would absolutely be a bad thing.

>> CORRECT

When I was at teenager, I wanna be an adult fast.

>> When I was teenager, I wanted to be an adult already.

But I became a 20s, the time so flies.

>> But when I was at my 20\'s, time flew so fast.

And I feel scared that I will be a 30s.

>> And I feel scared that I will be in my 30\'s.

Also, I\'m afraid I\'ll die without getting married.

>> I am also afraid of dying without getting married.

If she dumps me the next time, I\'ll curse her. :)

>>If she dumps me again next time, I\'ll curse her. :)

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