Do you think going to different academies is important for student\'s learning? Why or why not?

Do you think going to different academies is important for student\'s learning? Why or why not? The zeal for student\'s education in Korea is quite high. So, many students study to the academies after schoolwork. That\'s why students don\'t spend much time in schoolwork. They think that academy class is the most important. It has a negarive influence about academcy class.

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I think this is beneficial for students in terms of preparing for the universities that they are gonna go to in the future. But this can also lessen the time to enjoy you childhood since you would be studying most of the time. It has both advantages and disadvantages. 

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