Do you think having a goal in doing something is far better than just dreaming about it? Explain.
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I think of course it is better because of good reasons.
First, just dreaming about it have a low possibility of doing it in real life.
But if you set a goal, you can plan what to do and it\'s much helpful.
Also it\'s important ( well not that important ) to write about your goals.
Because you can forget and have other goals.
So few days or weeks, even years later, when your skills have improved, you can think \' Oh I forgot this one. I think it\'s a great idea though, maybe I should try it. \'
So I think just dreaming about it is maybe a good start, but it\'s good to set goals like this. c:
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Do you think having a goal in doing something is far better than just dreaming about it? Explain.
I think of course it is better because of good reasons.
>>> Of course it is better because of good reasons.
First, just dreaming about it have a low possibility of doing it in real life.
>>> First, just dreaming about something means there\'s a lower possibility of doing it in real life.
But if you set a goal, you can plan what to do and it\'s much helpful.
>>> CORRECT
Also it\'s important ( well not that important ) to write about your goals. Because you can forget and have other goals.
>>> Also, it\'s important to write about your goals because you might forget them and have other goals..
So few days or weeks, even years later, when your skills have improved, you can think \' Oh I forgot this one.
>>> So a few days or weeks, even years later, when your skills have improved, you can think \" Oh I forgot this one.\"
I think it\'s a great idea though, maybe I should try it. \'
>> \" I think it\'s a great idea though, maybe I should try it. \"
So I think just dreaming about it is maybe a good start, but it\'s good to set goals like this.
>>> CORRECT
OR: So I think just dreaming about it is maybe a good start, but it\'s good to set goals like this and start doing them.
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