Do you think having a hobby is important?
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Do you think having a hobby is important?
Yes, I think it\'s important.
Because people need time to relieve stress. I think people can relieve stress if people focus on personal hobby.
Also, I hate wasting time. If I do anything, I feel like wasting my time.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! I definitely agree with you. Doing what you enjoy rather than just anything benefits us. Thank you for this. See you this Friday!
- Teacher Jade
Do you think having a hobby is important?
Yes, I think it\'s important.
>> Correct
Because people need time to relieve stress.
>> Correct
>> OR: Because people need time to relax.
>> OR: Because people need time to relax.
I think people can relieve stress if people focus on personal hobby.
>> I think people can relieve stress if they focus on their personal hobbies.
Also, I hate wasting time.
>> Correct
>> OR: I hate wasting time as well.
>> OR: I hate wasting time as well.
If I do anything, I feel like wasting my time.
>> Correct
>> OR: I feel like I am wasting my time if I just do anything.
>> Correct
>> OR: I feel like I am wasting my time if I just do anything.
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