Do you think having a pet is good? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, and sometimes I guess a pet is better than people. People can betray, but a pet isn\'t. The more love a pet gets. Walking, taking care of food, cleaning up, and so on, but I can handle it due to a part of my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic:)
Of course, and sometimes I guess a pet is better than people.
>> Sometimes, having a pet is better than having other people in your house.
People can betray, but a pet isn\'t.
>> People can betray you but pets won\'t.
The more love a pet gets.
>> The more that you love your pet, the more it\'s going to love you.
Walking, taking care of food, cleaning up, and so on, but I can handle it due to a part of my family.
>> You have to walk it, give it food, clean up after it and so on but I can handle it [이름]ce I consider it part of my family.
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