Do you think having a sibling or siblings is important? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Sorry late responds.
Siblings is better than a sibling in family
because we are in family and it is consist of individual.
sometimes they are fighting,arguing and finally shake hands each other after full understanding of their mind together.
So I really recommend new couple who is prepare getting merry to have at least 2~3 babies.
Of course, I will have plan to say it to my babies in wedding days.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jack!
Thank you for submitting your answer and for sharing your opinion about it.
I actually agree about having siblings since it would really be nice.
As they say, siblings are our friends too especially while growing up. ^^
Here is a reminder: ^^
- When you are making a sentence, make the form of the verbs consistent.
Example:
>> We are cooking, cleaning and washing the clothes.
>> We will cook, clean and wash the clothes.
>> We cooked, cleaned and washed the clothes.
~Teacher Gina
>> Sorry, late response.
Siblings is better than a sibling in family
Siblings is better than a sibling in family
>> Siblings is better than a sibling in a family
because we are in family and it is consist of individual.
because we are in family and it is consist of individual.
>> because we are in a family and it consists individuals.
>> because we are in a family and it is consisted of individuals.
sometimes they are fighting, arguing and finally shake hands each other after full understanding of their mind together.
sometimes they are fighting, arguing and finally shake hands each other after full understanding of their mind together.
>> Sometimes they are fighting, arguing and finally shaking each other\'s hands after fully understanding their thoughts together.
So I really recommend new couple who is prepare getting merry to have at least 2~3 babies.
So I really recommend new couple who is prepare getting merry to have at least 2~3 babies.
>> So I really recommend a new couple who is preparing to get married to have at least 2-3 babies.
Of course, I will have plan to say it to my babies in wedding days.
Of course, I will have plan to say it to my babies in wedding days.
>> Of course, I will have a plan to say it to my babies in their wedding days.
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