Do you think having siblings or being an only child is better? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like having siblings at least more than 3.
Siblings make each other helpful and socialized in family.
Family is a small society.
So,they can learn how communicated ,having relationship and family value also too.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
It\'s good to build your confidence.
Know your good points and work on them more.
You can accomplish a lot that way.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like having siblings at least more than 3.
>> I like having at least more than three siblings.
Siblings make each other helpful and socialized in family.
Siblings make each other helpful and socialized in family.
>> Siblings help each other and do things together.
Family is a small society.
Family is a small society.
>> Correct
So,they can learn how communicated ,having relationship and family value also too.
So,they can learn how communicated ,having relationship and family value also too.
>> That\'s how people learn how to communicate, have relationships and practice family values, too.
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