Do you think hobbies should be practical(like cooking) or just for fun(like gaming)? Explain your op

2026-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I think the should be practical is the best hobby because just for fun hobby is always play. So be practical is the best hobby.

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Do you think hobbies should be practical(like cooking) or just for fun(like gaming)? Explain your opinion.

I think the should be practical is the best hobby because just for fun hobby is always play.

>>> I think practical hobbies are the best because hobbies that are only for fun usually involve just playing.

>>> OR: Practical hobbies are the best because they are useful, while fun hobbies are only for playing.

So be practical is the best hobby.

>>> Therefore, practical hobbies are the best.

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