Do you think holidays are important? Why?

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Of course I think holidays are very important.

>> Of course, I think holidays are very important.
Because it\'s possible to work everyday.

>> Because it\'s not possible to work everyday.
All people need to rest regularly.

>> Everyone needs to rest regularly.
If you work everyday, you will exhaust soon.

>> If you work everyday, you will be exhausted sooner or later.