Do you think human activities contribute to environment problem?
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You were able to express your thoughts about the given topic. Keep working on your sentence making patterns. Keep it up!
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Most people destroy to environment for own\'s benefit and convenience.
>>> Most people destroy the environment for their own benefit and convenience.
They look ar just their purpose that money, science development, material, can\'t think follow to big disaster.
>>> [Do you mean:The only purpose of the government\'s fund is for the materials for the science development project that can prevent future disasters.]
Recently one of the worst environment problem is Global warming.
>>> Recently, one of the worst environmental problems is Global warming.
Where was it start come from?The answer is human.
>>> Where did it come from? The answer is from human.
Human development has caused glacier to melt and raise water tempertures, so the type of fish decreases and the number of predators who feed on them decrease.
>>> Human development has caused glacier to melt and raise water temperature, so the species of fish and the number of predators who feed on them have decreased.
In addition, other problem include fine dust and ozone layer due to air pollution.
>>> In addition, other problems include fine dust and the damaging effect of the ozone layer due to air pollution.
If you ask me choose the worst criminal on earth, I will choose human.
>>> If you\'ll ask me to choose the worse criminal on earth, I will choose human.
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